How do you typically celebrate your achievements?
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If someone got a huge achievement, company could give a prize with a money.
Company usually hold a year end ceremony, that time the company give a prize to someone who has huge achievement for this year.
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If someone got a huge achievement, company could give a prize with a money.
>> If someone achieves a huge accomplishment, the company could give a monetary prize.
Company usually hold a year end ceremony, that time the company give a prize to someone who has huge achievement for this year.
>>The company usually holds a year-end ceremony, during which a prize is awarded to those who have made significant achievements throughout the year.
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