How do you typically protect yourself from the dust when it’s bad?

2025-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Lia

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It would be best not to go out to protect me on a dusty day. However, it is not possible on weekdays. I use a mask or an air purifier to clean the indoor environment. But what I think is important is to drink a lot of water and clean up the shower after going out. This is because even if I protect my mouth and nose with a mask, dust comes into my clothes and body. For my health, the first is washing and the second is washing.

강사 첨삭

Hi David! Thank you for sharing your response! You made some great points about staying protected on dusty days. Your ideas are well-structured, and with these small refinements, your message becomes even clearer. Keep up the great work!


~ T. Lia

It would be best not to go out to protect me on a dusty day.
>> It would be best not to go out on a dusty day to protect myself.


However, it is not possible on weekdays.
>> CORRECT


I use a mask or an air purifier to clean the indoor environment.
>> I use a mask or an air purifier to maintain clean indoor air.


But what I think is important is to drink a lot of water and clean up the shower after going out.
>> However, I think it is important to drink plenty of water and take a shower after going out.


This is because even if I protect my mouth and nose with a mask, dust comes into my clothes and body.
>> This is because, even if I protect my mouth and nose with a mask, dust still gets on my clothes and body.


For my health, the first is washing and the second is washing.
>> For my health, the first priority is washing, and the second is also washing.

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