How do you usually ask information?

2020-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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Dear [Name], I get a information from the website. When I was young I got it from the newspapers & TV. Now I use mobile phone to get a informations.

Hi [이름], Thank you for taking your time on answering your homework. It is much appreciated. Keep up the good work.

Here are your corrections:

Dear [Name],

I get a information from the website.

>> I get information from the website.

When I was young I got it from the newspapers & TV.

>> When I was young, I get it from the newspapers and TV.

Now I use mobile phone to get a informations.

>> Now, I use my mobile phone to get the information I need.

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