How do you usually cope with stress?

2020-11-13 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

Everybody has their stress that is big or small. Some person is trying to bear this stress without shouting or blame and the other is trying to fight him at once. The most important is how to solve it smoothly. So we can find this kind of consultants site in internet easily. And also. this makes social and suicide problem.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Ethan!

Thank you for sending your answer to me.

All of us are definitely experiencing or have experienced stress.

And I agree with you, the most important is how to solve it smoothly.

I hope that we will always find help and solutions whenever we are stressed out. ^^

Here are some notes regarding my corrections.

-When you use \'some\', the noun following it should be in plural form.

Example: some people, some residents, some animals

-You should also be consistent in the verb form you use in one sentence.

Example: Instead of \'without shouting or blame\' , it should be \'without shouting or blaming\' so both verbs are in -ing form.

- Use \'on\' when referring to the internet or TV or computer.

Example: I found this article on the internet.

I have seen the news on TV.

I read this message on your computer.

~Teacher Gina

Everybody has their stress that is big or small.

>> CORRECT.
Some person is trying to bear this stress without shouting or blame and the other is trying to fight him at once.

>> Some people are trying to bear this stress without shouting or blaming and the others are trying to fight him at once.

The most important is how to solve it smoothly.

>> CORRECT.
So we can find this kind of consultants site in internet easily.

>> So we can find this kind of consultant site on the internet easily.
And also. this makes social and suicide problem.

>> And also, this makes a social and suicide problem.

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