How do you usually cope with stress?

2019-08-19 · 첨삭 강사 May

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I am not sure if people cope with stress. Many people get sick because of stress and as It is reported that the stress is one of the major cause of the serious diseases. There is saying in Korea that \"if we can\'t avoid it, enjoy it\". I don\'t fully agree with this saying but it makes sense. However, I think I would better learning how to relieve my stress. So, I want to state how I relieve my stress. First thing that I do is draw a long breath whenever I face a stressed situation. The easiest way to relive my stress is smoking. It takes only few minutes and helps me a lot for reliving my stress. Second, I usually ask my friends or colleagues to go out for dinner and speak my concern to them even though they don\\\'t have any advice. I just want them to listen to my concerns. Alcohol also helps me forget my concerns. Lastly, I prefer to do exercise that make me sweat. Working out definitely help people relieve their stress.

강사 첨삭

Thanks for sharing [이름]! I do agree with what you said that working out is one of the best ways

to relieve stress. It\'s also a good idea to talk with friends. Sometimes we don\'t really need to

listen to their advice but we need them to listen to our story. Have a nice day. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

I am not sure if people cope with stress.

>> CORRECT

Many people get sick because of stress and as It is reported that the stress is one of the major cause of the serious diseases.

>> Many people get sick because of stress and it is reported that stress is one of the major causes of serious diseases.

There is saying in Korea that \"if we can\'t avoid it, enjoy it\".

>> There is a saying in Korea that \"If we can\'t avoid it, enjoy it\".

I don\'t fully agree with this saying but it makes sense.

>> CORRECT

However, I think I would better learning how to relieve my stress.

>> However, I think I would rather learn how to relieve my stress.

So, I want to state how I relieve my stress. 

>> CORRECT
 First thing that I do is draw a long breath whenever I face a stressed situation.

>> The first thing I do is to take a deep breath.

The easiest way to relive my stress is smoking.

>> CORRECT

It takes only few minutes and helps me a lot for reliving my stress.

>> It takes only few minutes and helps me a lot.

Second, I usually ask my friends or colleagues to go out for dinner and speak my concern to them even though they don\\\'t have any advice.

>> Secondly, I usually ask my friends or colleagues to go out for dinner and talk about my concern although they don\'t have any advice to give.

I just want them to listen to my concerns.

Alcohol also helps me forget my concerns.

>> CORRECT

Lastly, I prefer to do exercise that make me sweat.

>> Lastly, I prefer to do exercise to make me sweat.

 Working out definitely help people relieve their stress.

>> Working out definitely helps people relieve their stress.

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