How do you usually cope with stress?

2019-12-09 · 첨삭 강사 Avery

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I usually cope with stress by seeing the entertainment programs. My favorite program is Knowing Bros it is Korean popular entertainment program. I really like this program because it makes me that i can focus on only that program. And also i cope with stress by drinking bear with my friends. I think many people do like that way.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]! Thanks for talking about how you deal with stress.

Tell me more about it in class. See you! ^_^

~T.Avery

I usually cope with stress by seeing the entertainment programs.

>> I usually cope with stress by watching entertainment programs.

My favorite program is Knowing Bros it is Korean popular entertainment program.

>> My favorite show is Knowing Bros, a popular Korean entertainment program.

I really like this program because it makes me that i can focus on only that program.

>> I really like this program because it makes focus on that program alone.

And also i cope with stress by drinking bear with my friends.

>> Also, I cope with stress by drinking beer with my friends.

I think many people do like that way.

>> I think many people deal with stress the same way.

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