How do you usually cope with your stress?
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Fortunately, I’m not a type to get stressed a lot. But there are some ways to cope with my stress.
First of all, I go out and feel fresh air to relieve stress. For example, I walk my dog at a park near my home or run outside in the morning.
Secondary, I do what I like such as dong Pilates, doing strength training or playing golf. After sweating, I can feel better.
Finally, I eat a spicy food like tteokbokki. I cannot eat the spicy food well, but it helps me relieve stress.
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Good day, Elena!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
Fortunately, I’m not a type to get stressed a lot.
>> Fortunately, I’m not the type of person to get stressed a lot.
But there are some ways to cope with my stress.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> There are other ways to cope with stress.
First of all, I go out and feel fresh air to relieve stress.
>> CORRECT!
For example, I walk my dog at a park near my home or run outside in the morning.
>> CORRECT!
Secondary, I do what I like such as dong Pilates, doing strength training or playing golf.
>> Secondly, I do what I like such as dong Pilates, doing strength training or playing golf.
After sweating, I can feel better.
>> CORRECT!
Finally, I eat a spicy food like tteokbokki.
Finally, I eat a spicy food like tteokbokki.
>> Finally, I eat spicy food like tteokbokki.
I cannot eat the spicy food well, but it helps me relieve stress.
>> CORRECT!
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