How do you usually handle stress?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I get stress, I usually go to the gym and do hard work out.
There are many reasons why, but here is a couple.
First, I want to step back from the stress and think about more rational.
Next, Several hormones should be produced during exercising, making me feel delightful so I can relief my stress.
강사 첨삭
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When I get stress, I usually go to the gym and do hard work out.
>> When I get stressed, I usually go to the gym and do a hard workout.
There are many reasons why, but here is a couple.
There are many reasons why, but here is a couple.
>> There are many reasons why, but here are a couple.
First, I want to step back from the stress and think about more rational.
First, I want to step back from the stress and think about more rational.
>> First, I want to step back from the stress and think more rationally.
Next, Several hormones should be produced during exercising, making me feel delightful so I can relief my stress.
Next, Several hormones should be produced during exercising, making me feel delightful so I can relief my stress.
>> Next, several hormones are produced during exercise, making me feel delighted, so I can relieve my stress.
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