How do you usually set your goals?
학생이 쓴 원문
I usally set goals seperately in short term goal and long term goal. If we set only short term goal, we can feel achivememt frequently. However, we might be lose the way because the goal is disapeared after achiving it. If we have only long term goal, because ways to go to the goal is various and too far, we might feel confusion and failure. Therefore, I think we need to set short term goals in middle of long term goal for motivation and achievement.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Mary! You did a great job explaining how you set goals and why balancing short-term and long-term goals is important. I like how you thought about both frequent achievements and maintaining motivation over time, that shows clear and practical thinking. To make your writing even stronger, pay attention to small grammar points, spelling, and hyphenation (like “short-term” and “long-term”), and try using smoother expressions for clarity. Overall, your ideas are very thoughtful and well-organized. Keep it up!
-Teacher Wela
I usally set goals seperately in short term goal and long term goal.
>> I usually set goals separately as short-term goals and long-term goals.
If we set only short term goal, we can feel achivememt frequently.
>> If we set only short-term goals, we can feel a sense of achievement frequently.
However, we might be lose the way because the goal is disapeared after achiving it.
>> However, we might lose our way because the goal disappears after achieving it.
If we have only long term goal, because ways to go to the goal is various and too far, we might feel confusion and failure.
>> If we have only long-term goals, the ways to reach the goal are varied and long, so we might feel confused and frustrated.
Therefore, I think we need to set short term goals in middle of long term goal for motivation and achievement.
>> Therefore, I think we need to set short-term goals in the middle of a long-term goal to maintain motivation and achieve success.
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