How do you usually treat someone who\'s new in town?
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I usually greet happily new in town. If he is as same old as me, I want to be a friend with him. But anyone wasn\'t be my friend. If I have a chance, I want to be familiar with him.
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I usually greet happily new in town.
>> I usually give an enthusiastic greeting to those who are new in town.
If he is as same old as me, I want to be a friend with him.
>> If he is as old as I am, I will befriend him.
But anyone wasn\'t be my friend.
>> But not everyone is friendly.
If I have a chance, I want to be familiar with him.
>> If I have a chance, I hope to be close to him.
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