How do you usually your great co-workers?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name],
Thank you for your kindness lesson.
I have a good co-workers. They always helps me. My manager take care of my businesx problems. My colligue give me a idea to make a sales too.
I appreciate to my co-worker.
I would like to suggest you about my business lesson. I would like to talk to you about lesson1 like a real situation tomorrow.
So, if you call to me tomorrow,
You say \'hello?\'
I will reply \' Good evening. this is [이름] from Werfen Korea I would like ~
You say \' hi Hold on~
Continuous ~
After finish talking, you correct my errors or mistakes and pronounciation.
I want to repeat like this talking after lesson.
What do you think about my opinion?
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]~
It\'s okay to do your suggestion. We will do it like in a real situation. That is how we are going to start our class. See you later in class.
It\'s okay to do your suggestion. We will do it like in a real situation. That is how we are going to start our class. See you later in class.
Here are your corrections:
Thank you for your kindness lesson.
>> Thank you for your kindness in teaching the lesson.
>> I have good co-workers.
They always helps me.
>> They always help me.
My manager take care of my businesx problems.
>> My manager takes care of my business problems.
My colligue give me a idea to make a sales too.
>> My colleagues give me ideas to makes sales too.
>> I appreciate my co-workers.
>> I would like to suggest something about my business lesson.
I would like to talk to you about lesson1 like a real situation tomorrow.
>> I would like to do the lesson 1 like in a real situation.
You say \'hello?\'
>> So, if you will call me tomorrow, you will say, \"Hello?\".
You say \' hi Hold on~
Continuous ~
>> My reply will be, \"Good evening. this is [이름] from Werfen Korea I would like ~\" and so on.
>> After talking, you will correct any errors, mistakes in pronunciation I committed.
>> I want to repeat it again before we end the lesson.
>> CORRECT // but instead of \"opinion\" use \"suggestion\"
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