How do you value friendship? Explain your answer in as much detail as you can.
학생이 쓴 원문
I hardly deliver my feeling. Recently, I think that I should more communicate with my lovely people. In fact, I barely say the word \"love\"or \"thank\". It originate the event that happened a long time ago. In my hometown, my childhood friend said that the men should be reserved. so, I became the person who hardly says the word of appreciation. I need to solve my problem and I would try my best
강사 첨삭
Hi, Kevin! Thanks for sharing your overview about friendship. I agree that you should talk to your loved ones more often as communication is the key to build a harmonious relationship. Keep it up.
I hardly deliver my feeling.
>>I hardly express my feelings.
Recently, I think that I should more communicate with my lovely people.
>>Recently, I think I should communicate more with my loved ones.
In fact, I barely say the word \"love\"or \"thank\".
>> In fact, I barely say \"I love you\" or \"thank you\".
It originate the event that happened a long time ago.
>>It started a couple of years ago.
In my hometown, my childhood friend said that the men should be reserved.
>>Correct!
so, I became the person who hardly says the word of appreciation.
>>I became a person who hardly expresses words of appreciation.
I need to solve my problem and I would try my best
>>I would do my best to correct my self.
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