How do you want art to be defined?
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I think art should be maintained abstract. If art is defined in a narrow bound, that is to limit people\'s thinking. Then people will discuss about art. And, art will develop in this process.
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I think art should be maintained abstract.
>> I believe that art should be keep abstract.
If art is defined in a narrow bound, that is to limit people\'s thinking.
>> Correct!
Then people will discuss about art. And, art will develop in this process.
>> Correct!
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