How do you want to be comforted when you are not in your best condition?
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I just want to play game when I\'m in bad condition. I\'m sensitive to everyone when I\'m in bad condition. So, I want to have free time to control my feeling.
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I just want to play game when I\'m in bad condition.
>> I just want to play games when I\'m in a bad condition.
I\'m sensitive to everyone when I\'m in bad condition.
>> I\'m sensitive to my surroundings and about the presence of everyone when I\'m in this kind of situation.
So, I want to have free time to control my feeling.
>> or: So, I want to be left alone in order to collect myself.
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