How do you want to celebrate your life after the pandemic?

2020-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Jasper

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After pandemic, I will go to every where such as swiming pool, restaurants, gym etc. I will meet my relatives and friends and will have a nice meal. I will go to abroad soon. I hope the pandemic will over soon.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]~ Thanks for your composition. I hope you have a great day today. See you later!

Here are your corrections:

After pandemic, I will go to every where such as swiming pool, restaurants, gym etc.

>> After the pandemic, I will go everywhere such as swimming pool, restaurants, gym, etc.

I will meet my relatives and friends and will have a nice meal.

>> I will meet my relatives and friends and we will have a nice meal.

I will go to abroad soon.

>> I will go abroad soon.

I hope the pandemic will over soon.

>> I hope the pandemic will be over soon.

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