How do you want to spend your free time?

2023-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Jamie

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There are a lot of things I want to do..:) I want to learn how to make potteries, cooking or something useful. I love things made with my hands. Yesterday I took a pottery class, and I made a cup, plate, and bowl. I was interested in this class. and I want to take more class. But it is hard to take classes regular time, because now I work 3 shifts. And I need more money too. Someday, if I can rest regularly, I want to learn something.

강사 첨삭

 Hello, Hyebin! Creating things by hand is always fun and enjoyable. I also enjoy getting crafty sometimes. Pottery classes are great because the products you make can be used. I\'m happy to hear that you enjoyed the class.

^^T.JAMIE


There are a lot of things I want to do..:)

>>CORRECT!

I want to learn how to make potteries, cooking or something useful. I love things made with my hands.

>>I want to learn how to make pottery, cook, or do something useful. I love creating things with my hands.

Yesterday I took a pottery class, and I made a cup, plate, and bowl. I was interested in this class. and I want to take more class.

>>Yesterday, I took a pottery class and made a cup, a plate, and a bowl. I was interested in this class, and I want to take more classes.

But it is hard to take classes regular time, because now I work 3 shifts. And I need more money too.

>>However, it is hard to take regular classes because I currently work three shifts and need more money too.

Someday, if I can rest regularly, I want to learn something.

>>Someday, if I can have a more regular schedule, I would like to learn something new.


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