How do you want your future to be?
학생이 쓴 원문
I want to be rich. And what I want most is to be happy with my family, my lover, and my friends.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름] [이름]! It\'s wonderful to have aspirations for both wealth and happiness with loved ones. Finding that balance is key to a fulfilling life.
~T. Jenna
I want to be rich.
Correct, or
>>I dream to be wealthy.
And what I want most is to be happy with my family, my lover, and my friends.
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>> I value nothing more than finding joy and contentment alongside my family, my beloved partner, and cherished friends.
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