How do you welcome your new neighbor to your community?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. How do you welcome your new neighbor to your community?
I welcome my new neighbor to my community. We introduce us to each other and shake hands to greet warmly.
2. What kind of person would be the perfect neighbor?
I think the perfect neighbor would be a person not to do harm to others and do kindly behavior to neighbors.
강사 첨삭
1. How do you welcome your new neighbor to your community?
I welcome my new neighbor to my community.
I welcome my new neighbor to my community.
>>> correct
We introduce us to each other and shake hands to greet warmly.
>>> We introduce ourselves to each other and shake hands to greet warmly.
2. What kind of person would be the perfect neighbor?
I think the perfect neighbor would be a person not to do harm to others and do kindly behavior to neighbors.
>>> We introduce ourselves to each other and shake hands to greet warmly.
2. What kind of person would be the perfect neighbor?
I think the perfect neighbor would be a person not to do harm to others and do kindly behavior to neighbors.
>>> OR: I think the perfect neighbor would be a person not to do harm to others and do a kind behavior towards neighbors.
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