How do young people in your culture behave differently from older people?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, young people are straightforward than older people.
Because of this reason, there are several conflicts between youngsters and the old.
But, sometimes this make those people more familiar each other.
강사 첨삭
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>>In my opinion, young people are more straightforward than older people.
Because of this reason, there are several conflicts between youngsters and the old.
Because of this reason, there are several conflicts between youngsters and the old.
>>Because of this reason, there are several conflicts between youngsters and the elderly.
But, sometimes this make those people more familiar each other.
But, sometimes this make those people more familiar each other.
>>But, sometimes this makes those people more familiar with each other.
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