How do your parents look?

I live with my family now. I\'m always parents can see. but korean men must go to the army. so I lived apart from my parents 2 years. some day I have to live alone. Even after independence,If I want to meet parents. Anytime can see them. beacuse I likes seoul and parents think so. ha ha

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How do your parents look?

I live with my family now.

CORRECT!

or>>I am currently living with my family right now.

I\'m always parents can see.

>>I\'m always near my parents where they can see.

But Korean men must go to the army.

CORRECT!

or>>But men in Korea need to go to the army.

so I lived apart from my parents 2 years.

>>So, I lived apart from my parents for 2 years.

some day I have to live alone.

>>Someday, I have to live alone.

or>>One of these days, I have to live on my own.

Even after independence,If I want to meet parents. Anytime can see them.

>>Even after my independence, if I want to meet my parents, I want to be able to see them anytime I want.

beacuse I likes seoul and parents think so. ha ha

>>Because, I like Seoul and my parents think so too. Ha ha …