How doer smartphone make human relationship?

Hi Maria, ^^

Thank you so much for sharing your ideas. :)

In this generation, everything is digital and because of this, people tend

to hold their gadgets even closer to them than the people around them.

undeniably, the technology plays a very big part of our life and it makes it easier.

But hopefully, time will not come that we push people away just because we pay more

attention to our smartphones.

See you in class^^

Teacher Glenda

Here are my corrections:

Smartphone connects intimately with others when we talk to each other and share the same site.

>> Smartphones connect us with others intimately when we talk to each other and share the same site.

Most of us are obsessed with the smartphone, and then they are not interested in people who are realistically cldse and themselves.

>> Most of us are obsessed with smartphone which makes us not interested in people who are realistically close to us.

I think people should live wihtout smartphone regularly or periodically .

>> Correct