How does a change in temperature affect your feelings?
학생이 쓴 원문
The human\'s mind is affected by temperature and seasons.
When spring is coming, we feel happy and warm.
If temperature is too high, we feel angry easily.
강사 첨삭
Good day, [이름]!^^
Stay warm this winter season.
~Kelly^^
The human\'s mind is affected by temperature and seasons.>> Correct
When spring is coming, we feel happy and warm.
When spring is coming, we feel happy and warm.
>> Correct
If temperature is too high, we feel angry easily.
If temperature is too high, we feel angry easily.
>> If the temperature is too high, we feel angry easily.
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