How does a computer help us learn and have fun?
학생이 쓴 원문
Most of people use a computer program every day.
They try lots of information through internet searching
and learn playing games,research,and getting knowledge also.
It make us enjoying on line .
강사 첨삭
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Most of people use a computer program every day.
>> Most people use a computer program every day.
They try lots of information through internet searching
They try lots of information through internet searching
>> They gather lots of information by surfing the Internet.
and learn playing games,research,and getting knowledge also.
and learn playing games,research,and getting knowledge also.
>> People can also play games, do research and acquire knowledge, too.
It make us enjoying on line .
It make us enjoying on line .
>> These are things that we can enjoy online.
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