How does age affect a person’s ability to learn a new language?
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How does age affect a person’s ability to learn a new language?
I think the younger, the more advantages they will have. For example, some parents let their children go to English kindergarden, at that moment, they can learn English easily. Of course, it depends on their efforts.
When I was studying Chinese with a student whose age is same as my grandfather, he said he should have started studying Chinese earlier. He said it is too hard to learn new language when getting older.
However, in my opinion, age can effect a person\'s ability to learn a new language, but if there is a bigger efforts or actions, age doesn\'t matter. Just doing our best is a the best way to learn a language.
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Hi, [이름] Su!
I completely agree that efforts and determination are much more important than that of age. Good job in doing your homework and in expressing your thoughts about this topic.
How does age affect a person’s ability to learn a new language?
>>CORRECT
I think the younger, the more advantages they will have.
I think the younger, the more advantages they will have.
>> I think the younger you are, the more advantageous it will be.
For example, some parents let their children go to English kindergarden,
>>For example, some parents enroll their children to English kindergartens.
at that moment, they can learn English easily.
>>CORRECT
Of course, it depends on their efforts.
>>CORRECT
When I was studying Chinese with a student whose age is same as my grandfather,
When I was studying Chinese with a student whose age is same as my grandfather,
>>When I was studying Chinese with a student whose age is the same as my grandfather.
he said he should have started studying Chinese earlier.
>>CORRECT
He said it is too hard to learn new language when getting older.
>>He said it\'s more difficult to learn a new language as we get older.
However, in my opinion, age can effect a person\'s ability to learn a new language,
However, in my opinion, age can effect a person\'s ability to learn a new language,
>> However, in my opinion, age has an effect when it comes to a person\'s ability to learn a new language.
but if there is a bigger efforts or actions, age doesn\'t matter.
>> But with great effort and determination, age won\'t matter.
Just doing our best is a the best way to learn a language.
>>Just doing our best is the best way to learn a new language.
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