How does alcohol change your behavior, personality, and face?

2022-10-24 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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I\'m not good at grinkinh alcohol. But somethimes when I drunk alcohol a lot, I got change somethings. First, actually I\'m a quite person but if I get drunk, I became a loud person. And my action will be biger. My mood bacome to high tention. And my face turns red face. and finally I got a sleep. I\'m very tired when I drunk so I want to go home and I want to sleep on my bed. So sometimes I ran away from the table without anyone knowing. But usually I don\'t drink a lot so these behavior are rarely comes.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] [이름]!

Well, drinking alcohol gives everybody confidence. Better control what you drink so you won\'t feel embarrassed the next day. Have a great time having fun! ^^

~T. Maine

I\'m not good at grinkinh alcohol.

>>I\'m not good at drinking alcohol.

But somethimes when I drunk alcohol a lot, I got change somethings.

>> But sometimes when I drink a lot of alcohol, I change my personality.
First, actually I\'m a quite person but if I get drunk, I became a loud person.

>> First, actually I\'m a quiet person but if I get drunk, I become loud.

And my action will be biger.

>> And my action is really a big change.
My mood bacome to high tention.

>> My mood becomes so energetic.
And my face turns red face. and finally I got a sleep.

>> And my face turns red then finally feel sleepy.
I\'m very tired when I drunk so I want to go home and I want to sleep on my bed.

>> I\'m very tired when I drink so I want
So sometimes I ran away from the table without anyone knowing.

>> So sometimes, I run away from the table without anyone knowing it.
But usually I don\'t drink a lot so these behavior are rarely comes.

>> But usually, I don\'t drink a lot, so these behaviors rarely comes out.

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