How does behavior change across different life stages, from childhood to adulthood?
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When I was young, my behaviour depends on my parents. I followed their actions and words. When I was teenage, I was close to my friends and our behaviors seem similar. After I grew up, I have a responsibility own my behavior.
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When I was young, my behaviour depends on my parents.
>>When I was young, my behavior depended on my parents.
I followed their actions and words.
>>Correct.
When I was teenage, I was close to my friends and our behaviors seem similar.
>>When I was a teenager, I was close to my friends and our behaviors seemed similar.
After I grew up, I have a responsibility own my behavior.
>>After I grew up, I had a responsibility for my own behavior.
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