How does being abused as a child effect a person\'s relationship with other people?(ANSWER)

2019-02-25 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

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They feel uneasy because they can\'t reveal themselves and remember the abuse. Also, they try to hide themselves and suppresses their emotions, so they can\'t easily relate to other people\'s feelings. The fear may also make them reluctant to bump into others or going outside.

강사 첨삭

Hey, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you for writing this essay.
I loved reading about it.

I\'m really amazed with how you look at things.

I feel like you\'re a 40-year-old woman trapped inside a 14-year-old kid because of your mature opinions. kkk.  ^^

I agree that abused children struggle to relate with other people because of their trust issues.

However, we should not judge them harshly.
They act that way because of their past.

Anyhow, I hope you\'re having a relaxing afternoon.
Don\'t forget to take a nap. ^_~
See you in class later. :*
~Teacher Charry


They feel uneasy because they can\'t reveal themselves and remember the abuse.

>> CORRECT!

Also, they try to hide themselves and suppresses their emotions, so they can\'t easily relate to other people\'s feelings. 

>> Also, they try to hide themselves and suppress their emotions, so they can\'t easily relate to other people\'s feelings. 
The fear may also make them reluctant to bump into others or going outside.

>> CORRECT!

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