How does Christmas affect people’s mood or feelings?
학생이 쓴 원문
How does Christmas affect people’s mood or feelings?
It makes people want to buy some presents for other person like child or loved person.
Some people gets strong power to say love truly and It makes people happy and fun, the word by itself.
It makes also many children to have been doing kind works for christmas gifts.
It happens some destiny in society, surprisely.
In my case, It made me a lier to my son about the exist the santa.
He thought it is suspicious as you know.
I wanted to give him some evidences of the santa.
It was “The santa tracker” as I told you.
He said “ You don’t need to lie to me, I already know it.”.
I kept saying it’s true, finally he slept with the belief.
I did it. So I had to go my parking lot for his christmas gift.
강사 첨삭
It makes people want to buy some presents for other person like child or loved person.
Some people gets strong power to say love truly and It makes people happy and fun, the word by itself.
>> Some people gain the courage to express their love, which makes them happy and joyful, the word itself carries power.
>>It makes people want to buy presents for others, like children or loved ones.
Some people gets strong power to say love truly and It makes people happy and fun, the word by itself.
>> Some people gain the courage to express their love, which makes them happy and joyful, the word itself carries power.
It makes also many children to have been doing kind works for christmas gifts.
>> It also inspires many children to do kind deeds in preparation for Christmas gifts.
>> It also inspires many children to do kind deeds in preparation for Christmas gifts.
It happens some destiny in society, surprisely.
>> Sometimes, surprising things happen in society as if by destiny.
>> Sometimes, surprising things happen in society as if by destiny.
In my case, It made me a lier to my son about the exist the santa.
>> In my case, it made me a liar to my son about the existence of Santa.
>> In my case, it made me a liar to my son about the existence of Santa.
He thought it is suspicious as you know.
>> As you know, he found it suspicious.
>> As you know, he found it suspicious.
I wanted to give him some evidences of the santa.
>> I wanted to give him some evidence of Santa’s existence.
>> I wanted to give him some evidence of Santa’s existence.
It was “The santa tracker” as I told you.
>> It was “The Santa Tracker,” as I told you.
He said “ You don’t need to lie to me, I already know it.”.
>> He said, “You don’t need to lie to me; I already know.”
>> He said, “You don’t need to lie to me; I already know.”
I kept saying it’s true, finally he slept with the belief.
>> I kept insisting it was true, and finally, he went to sleep believing it.
>> I kept insisting it was true, and finally, he went to sleep believing it.
I did it. So I had to go my parking lot for his christmas gift.
>> I did it, so I had to go to my car in the parking lot to get his Christmas gift.
OR >> I did it, so I had to go to the parking lot to get his Christmas gift.
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