How does fashion affect people’s lives
학생이 쓴 원문
I think fashion reflects the person\'s individuality.
According to the colors or types of clothes, we can express our individuality.
There are many trends of fashion every year or every seasons.
Some people follows the fashion trends unconditionally.
However, making their own styles is important to strength the self-confidence.
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Jasmin
I think fashion reflects the person\'s individuality.
>>I think fashion reflects a person\'s character.
According to the colors or types of clothes, we can express our individuality.
According to the colors or types of clothes, we can express our individuality.
>>Our choice of colors can determine our personalities.
There are many trends of fashion every year or every seasons.
There are many trends of fashion every year or every seasons.
>>Fashion trends are evolving constantly for changing times.
Some people follows the fashion trends unconditionally.
Some people follows the fashion trends unconditionally.
>> Some people follow the latest fashion trends all the time .
However, making their own styles is important to strength the self-confidence.
However, making their own styles is important to strength the self-confidence.
>>However, having your own style that you\'re comfortable with is important in gaining self-confidence.
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