How does fashion influence the way people think about others?
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It does not influence the way people think about others but if this day is a sad day but if that person were a party clothes then people might think that person is not very good at fashion.
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It does not influence the way people think about others.
>> Correct
but if this day is a sad day but if that person were a party clothes then people might think that person is not very good at fashion.
>> However, if it\'s a sad occasion and one person is wearing party clothes, other people might think that he or she doesn\'t dress appropriately.
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