How does military service impact an individual\'s personal and professional development?
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To tell you about me, It impact my social skills and confidence. But I didn\'t develop skills required by society. In other person(my friends, or other person), They talk about same things.
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How does military service impact an individual\'s personal and professional development?
To tell you about me, It impact my social skills and confidence.
>> As far as I\'m concerned, it impacts my social skills and confidence.
But I didn\'t develop skills required by society.
>> I couldn\'t develop the skills required by society.
In other person(my friends, or other person), They talk about same things.
>> Other people, such as my friends or others also say the same thing.
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