How does music make you feel?

2017-02-17 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Music can make me feel both glad and sorrowful. First, when I listen to bright music while I'm in good feeling, It make me more happy. In addition, I usually listen to the music when I travel with my friends or family. We can sing and dance all together and share the music which is liked by us. On the other hand, music can make me feel sad as well. I know that when we broke with someone, we usually listen to the sad song that has simiral stories of our breakup. At that time, we can sympathy and cry more and more. In conclusion, I think music is tool which can make us more emotional person.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!^^

They said that music is so powerful because it is a very effective way of expressing feelings. Listeners connect to each other in a special way because they understand the emotions behind a certain song. I hope that it will lighten your mood when you are stressed out. Enjoy the music of your life.

~Kelly^^

Music can make me feel both glad and sorrowful.

>> Correct.
First, when I listen to bright music while I\'m in good feeling, It make me more happy.

>> Firstly, when I listen to bright music while I\'m feeling good, I feel happier.  

In addition, I usually listen to the music when I travel with my friends or family.

>> In addition, I usually listen to music when I travel with my friends or family.  

We can sing and dance all together and share the music which is liked by us.

>> We can sing and dance all together and share the music we all like.
On the other hand, music can make me feel sad as well.

>> Correct.

I know that when we broke with someone, we usually listen to the sad song that has simiral stories of our breakup.

>> I know that when we broke up with someone, we usually listen to sad song that has similar stories of our breakup.

At that time, we can sympathy and cry more and more.

>> In that case, we can relate to the meaning of the song lyrics and cry more and more.
In conclusion, I think music is tool which can make us more emotional person.

>> In conclusion, I think music is a tool which can make us become more emotional.

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