How does one person’s character affect the personalities of surrounding people? Are you influenced b
학생이 쓴 원문
Each person has a different personality, so just because they\'re not the same as me is not a bad thing,
but it affects everything.
People are always influenced by their surroundings because the standard is their own.
I hate it uncomfortable as I get older, so I organized my surroundings.
I came out of a group of bad-natured friends and I hated the stress they gave me
They had a bad effect on my life, so it became common and organized.
Maybe I could be wrong, so I asked another friend
It was the same idea as me.
I have the wisdom to do the good together and get rid of the bad.
As I get older-
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Having friends has advantages and disadvantages. It\'s always wise to select our friends carefully because we can be influenced by their bad behavior. Enjoy your day!~~T.Dee
>>CORRECT!
People are always influenced by their surroundings because the standard is their own.
People are always influenced by their surroundings because the standard is their own.
>>CORRECT!
I hate it uncomfortable as I get older, so I organized my surroundings.
>>I hate it when I feel uncomfortable as I get older, so I try to control what surrounds me.
I came out of a group of bad-natured friends and I hated the stress they gave me.
I came out of a group of bad-natured friends and I hated the stress they gave me.
>>CORRECT!
They had a bad effect on my life, so it became common and organized.
They had a bad effect on my life, so it became common and organized.
>>They had a bad effect on my life and it has became common and acceptable.
Maybe I could be wrong, so I asked another friend.
Maybe I could be wrong, so I asked another friend.
>>CORRECT!
It was the same idea as me.
It was the same idea as me.
>>We have the same idea.
I have the wisdom to do the good together and get rid of the bad. As I get older-
I have the wisdom to do the good together and get rid of the bad. As I get older-
>>As I get older, I have naturally acquire the wisdom to do good and to get rid of the bad.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.