How does public transportation affect traffic and the environment?
학생이 쓴 원문
Public transportation has a positive effect on both traffic and the environment.
When we use public transportation, such as buses and subways, we don\'t need to drive our private cars.
This helps to reduce traffic jams and gas emissions.
Moreover, public transportation is more energy-efficient compared to private cars, so if we use public transportation, instead of private cars, the total amount of fuels will decrease dramatically.
Therefore, by using public transportation, we can help both traffic and the environment.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Excellent work! Your paragraph clearly explains the benefits of public transportation and gives good examples. Just watch small details like singular vs. plural (“fuel” instead of “fuels”) and punctuation for smoother reading. Keep writing with this level of clarity — you’re doing very well!
~Teacher Polly
Public transportation has a positive effect on both traffic and the environment.
>>CORRECT
When we use public transportation, such as buses and subways, we don\'t need to drive our private cars.
>>CORRECT
This helps to reduce traffic jams and gas emissions.
>>CORRECT
Moreover, public transportation is more energy-efficient compared to private cars, so if we use public transportation, instead of private cars, the total amount of fuels will decrease dramatically.
>>Moreover, public transportation is more energy-efficient compared to private cars. If we use public transportation instead of private cars, the total amount of fuel consumption will decrease dramatically.
Therefore, by using public transportation, we can help both traffic and the environment.
>>CORRECT
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