How does showing care towards others contribute to building strong relationships?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I reveal my attention to someone, the person will be pay attention to me. Sharing our interest and taking care of each other are being a good relation. Based on trust, we can make this relationship. As time goes by, this relation will be bonded strongly.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your homework, [이름]!
Practice makes progress!
-Hanna ^^
If I reveal my attention to someone, the person will be pay attention to me.
>>If I give my attention to someone, that person will pay attention to me.
Sharing our interest and taking care of each other are being a good relation.
>>Sharing our interests and taking care of each other are the foundations of a good relationship.
Based on trust, we can make this relationship.
>>Based on trust, we can build this relationship.
As time goes by, this relation will be bonded strongly.
>>As time goes by, this bond will become stronger.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.