How does social media affect people’s ideas about fitness and body image?
학생이 쓴 원문
In social media, there are many pictures of good bodies and exercising.
It intend to show off to someone.
That means people envy healthy life style of someone.
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In social media, there are many pictures of good bodies and exercising.
>> On social media, there are many pictures of fit bodies and people exercising.
It intend to show off to someone.
>> These posts are often intended to show off to others.
That means people envy healthy life style of someone.
>> This means that people may envy someone else’s healthy lifestyle.
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