How does social media influence people\'s fashion choices?
학생이 쓴 원문
Social media influence people a lot.
Many people see celebrities and influencers on social media, and what they wear.
They might buy some clothes if there is something they like.
One time, I was watching a TV show with my wife, and she suddenly said like oh, that jacket is cute. And she started shopping.
I think social media is not much different from TV show.
So, I think sometimes social media helps us find good items but sometimes it makes us buy something you actually don\'t need.
강사 첨삭
That\'s a good point, Jeoing [이름]!
Social media and TV both influence what people want to buy. The main difference is that social media is more personalized, so it\'s even easier to discover products that match your interests. That can be helpful, but it also encourages impulse buying.
- Kristine ^^
Social media influence people a lot.
>> Social media influences people a lot.
Many people see celebrities and influencers on social media, and what they wear.>> Many people see celebrities and influencers on social media and notice what they wear.
They might buy some clothes if there is something they like.
They might buy some clothes if there is something they like.
>> If they find something they like, they might buy it.
One time, I was watching a TV show with my wife, and she suddenly said like oh, that jacket is cute. And she started shopping.
One time, I was watching a TV show with my wife, and she suddenly said like oh, that jacket is cute. And she started shopping.
>> One time, I was watching a TV show with my wife, and she suddenly said, \"Oh, that jacket is so cute!\" Then she immediately started shopping online.
I think social media is not much different from TV show.
I think social media is not much different from TV show.
>> I think social media is not much different from TV shows.
So, I think sometimes social media helps us find good items but sometimes it makes us buy something you actually don\'t need.
So, I think sometimes social media helps us find good items but sometimes it makes us buy something you actually don\'t need.
>> So, I think social media sometimes helps us find good items, but it also makes us buy things we don\'t actually need.
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