How does social media influence the way people communicate with each other?
학생이 쓴 원문
social media makes people to share message, photos in real time and to respond immediately.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
social media makes people to share message, photos in real time and to respond immediately.
>> Social media allows people to share messages and photos in real time and respond immediately.
OR >> Social media enables people to share messages and photos instantly and respond right away.
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