How does stress affect people?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I were exposed a lot of stress, it will cause many dieseases.
For example, I sometimes feel stomachache when I have many stresses.
Like this example, the stress is origin of many dieseases. so, many doctor suggest that decresing stress.
강사 첨삭
Hey [이름]! Stress indeed affects a lot of people and is a huge factor in most diseases. We should really find more ways to de-stress.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
If I were exposed a lot of stress, it will cause many dieseases.
>> If I am exposed to a lot of stress, it can cause many diseases.
For example, I sometimes feel stomachache when I have many stresses.
>>For example, I sometimes feel a stomachache when I am under a lot of stress.
Like this example, the stress is origin of many dieseases. so, many doctor suggest that decresing stress.
>>Like this example, stress is the origin of many diseases. Therefore, many doctors suggest decreasing stress.
>> If I am exposed to a lot of stress, it can cause many diseases.
For example, I sometimes feel stomachache when I have many stresses.
>>For example, I sometimes feel a stomachache when I am under a lot of stress.
Like this example, the stress is origin of many dieseases. so, many doctor suggest that decresing stress.
>>Like this example, stress is the origin of many diseases. Therefore, many doctors suggest decreasing stress.
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