How does technology affect the society and the country?

After industrial revolution, human’s life has totally changed, and there are also tremendous effects on the society and the country. Nowadays, the national competitiveness is hugely depended on its level of technical development. In the past, national power was highly related in its population and the size of its territories. These factors are still very important, but they would not work properly, without technology. For example, China is the one of G2, called as the rival of USA, recently. However, it took several decades to get this status, though it has been the no.1 population country in the world since the beginning of the modern China. Because it was isolated to keep for a long time, and finally, it could retake its glory as a strong country after China opened doors and has been eager to learn advanced technology from others in 1990. Not only nations, but also many companies are on the same situation. Apple become a most valuable corporation in the world with a tiny smart phone.

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How does technology affect the society and the country?

After industrial revolution, human’s life has totally changed, and there are also tremendous effects on the society and the country.

>>After the industrial revolution, human life has totally changed, and there have also been some tremendous effects on the society and the country.

Nowadays, the national competitiveness is hugely depended on its level of technical development.

>>Nowadays, the national competitiveness is hugely dependent on the level of its technical development.

In the past, national power was highly related in its population and the size of its territories.

>>In the past, the nation’s power was highly related with its population and the size of its territories.

These factors are still very important, but they would not work properly without technology.

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or>>These factors still hold an importance to the nations success, but they would not be able to function well without the aid of technology.

For example, China is the one of G2, called as the rival of USA, recently.

>>For example, China is a member of the G2, and has been recently branded as a rival of the US.

However, it took several decades to get this status, though it has been the no.1 population country in the world since the beginning of the modern China.

>>However, it took them several decades to get this status, although they have been the no.1 most populous country in the world since the emergence of the modern China.

Because it was isolated to keep for a long time, and finally, it could retake its glory as a strong country after China opened doors and has been eager to learn advanced technology from others in 1990.

>>Because the country has isolated itself from the outside world for a long time. Until finally, it was able to recapture its former glory as a strong country since it opened its doors to the world and became eager to learn in advancing its technology from others in the 1990’s.

Not only nations, but also many companies are on the same situation.

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or>>Many countries and companies are on the same boat.

Apple become a most valuable corporation in the world with a tiny smart phone.

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or>>Apple emerged as a highly valuable corporation in the world with just a tiny smart phone.