How does the affordability of public transportation influence people\'s daily commuting choices?
학생이 쓴 원문
More than 70% of people use public transportation to commute to work. Since they work more than 20 days a month,
I think that if the cost of public transportation increases, it will have a fatal impact on people.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름]!
With so many people relying on public transportation every day, even a small increase in costs could make a big difference. It’s important to consider how this would affect everyone’s monthly budgets, especially for those who depend on it to get to work consistently.
~Kelly
More than 70% of people use public transportation to commute to work. >> Correct
OR:
>> Over 70% of people rely on public transportation to commute to work.
Given that most people work more than 20 days each month
>> Correct
OR:
>> Since they work more than 20 days a month
I think that if the cost of public transportation increases, it will have a fatal impact on people.
>> I think that if the cost of public transportation increases, it will have a severe impact on people.
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