How does the environment in your town affect your quality of life?

2019-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Thease days, we are suffering from the micro dust. It affects our life a lot. Many Koreans wear the masks on when we go out side because of the dust. And we refrain outdoor activity. So we are considering the fresh air is very precious.

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Thease days, we are suffering from the micro dust.

>>These days, we are suffering from micro dust.
It affects our life a lot. Many Koreans wear the masks on when we go out side because of the dust. And we refrain outdoor activity.

>>It affects our lives a lot. Many Koreans wear masks when they go out because of the dust. And we refrained from doing outdoor activities.
So we are considering the fresh air is very precious.

>>So we are considering that fresh air is very precious.

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