How does the pursuit of purpose change over different stages of life?

2023-08-10 · 첨삭 강사 Hanna

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In my case, first I set a goal and make plans detaily. However, growing older, my plans change from time to time. Every single time, I\'m on a way to choose which on is better to me. My life goes to not always what I want. After failing my first plan, and then I choose alternative way.

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Thank you for your homework, [이름]!

Keep up the great work!

-Hanna ^^

In my case, first I set a goal and make plans detaily.

>>In my case, first I set a goal and make detailed plans.

However, growing older, my plans change from time to time.

>>However, as I grow older, my plans change from time to time.

Every single time, I\'m on a way to choose which on is better to me.

>>Every single time, I\'m in the process of choosing what is better for me.

My life goes to not always what I want.

>>My life doesn\'t always go as planned.

After failing my first plan, and then I choose alternative way.

>>After failing my first plan, I then choose an alternative way.

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