>> How does the weather affect your mood?
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My pelvis hurts when it rains.And I think it\'s because of ballet.I started ballet when I was 6 years old.And I stretches every day So now when it rains my pelvis hurts.
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Jean~~
How does the weather affect your mood?
My pelvis hurts when it rains.
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And I think it\'s because of ballet.
>> OR: I guess the pain was caused by my doing ballet when I was younger.
I started ballet when I was 6 years old.
>> OR: I started doing ballet when I was 6.
And I stretches every day So now when it rains my pelvis hurts.
>> And I did some stretching every day so now, when it rains, my pelvis hurts.
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