How does the weather influence you?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was [이름], I was really influenced by the weather. I was blue on a rainy day because my hair would get wet, And I really don\'t like humid so I once cried because it was hot and uncomfortable when I get back from school. But now the weather doesn\'t make my mind change very much.
강사 첨삭
Here\'s your corrected composition, Gloria. I appreciate your sending it. A healthy and relaxing weekend to you! ♪(^_^)♪
Cheers,
Jean~~
When I was [이름], I was really influenced by the weather.
>> or: The weather had a strong influence on me when I was [이름]er.
I was blue on a rainy day because my hair would get wet, And I really don\'t like humid so I once cried because it was hot and uncomfortable when I get back from school.
>> I used to feel blue on a rainy day because my hair would get wet, and I really don\'t like it when it\'s humid so I once cried because it was hot and uncomfortable when I got back from school.
But now the weather doesn\'t make my mind change very much.
>>or: But now that I\'m all grown up, the weather doesn\'t affect me that much.
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