How does your friend feel about his brother going to the army?
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My friends is happy and sad because happy is my friend brother room is my friends room.
But sad is brother is going to the army?
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How does your friend feel about his brother going to the army?
My friends is happy and sad because happy is my friend brother room is my friends room.
>> My friend is happy and sad. Happy because he can occupy his brother\'s room.
But sad is brother is going to the army?
>> But sad because his brother is leaving for the army.
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