How does your mother help you?

2020-02-18 · 첨삭 강사 Sheila

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Dear teacher Sheila Hi there! I haven\'t heard from you for a long time. Is everything fine recently? I bought a book. The book be included many samples of an English e-mail. So i will look up the book\'s sample sentence. Thanks again for all your kind support. Your Sincerely, Tony Homework: How does your mother help you? She was my emotional anchor. Though she is woman, but she have a strong mind. Challenge herself to anything. I think great her challenge spirit.

강사 첨삭

Hello there Tony! Everything is doing great these past few days. Thank you for asking. 
Wow! That book must be interesting! You are really determined to improve your English skills. You can do it!

You mom must be a kind woman yet the strong one.

See you tomorrow! :)

~Teacher Sheila ^_^


She was my emotional anchor. 
>>She is my emotional anchor.
OR>> She has been my anchor of emotions. 

Though she is woman, but she have a strong mind.
>>Though she is a woman but she has a strong mind.

Challenge herself to anything. 
>>She challenges herself to anything.

I think great her challenge spirit.
>>I think that she has a great challenging spirit.
OR>>I think that her challenging spirit is great.

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