How does your weekend routine differ during different seasons of the year?
학생이 쓴 원문
In the weekend of spring and fall, I sometimes go out to enjoy the season.
However, I rarely go out in summer and winter. because it is too hot or cold.
except this, almost things are similar.
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In the weekend of spring and fall, I sometimes go out to enjoy the season.
>> On weekends in spring and fall, I sometimes go out to enjoy the season.
OR >> On spring and fall weekends, I occasionally go out to appreciate the season.
However, I rarely go out in summer and winter. because it is too hot or cold.
>> However, I rarely go out in summer and winter because it’s too hot or cold.
OR >> However, I seldom go out in summer or winter due to the extreme heat or cold.
except this, almost things are similar.
>> Other than that, most things remain the same.
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