How far is your parents\' hometown from the capital?
학생이 쓴 원문
My parent\'s hometown is Busan Korea.
Busan is located at the end of Korea.
So if i start at Seoul, It take to 6-7 hours by car to go to the Busan.
Especially during the holidays it take to 10 hours by car.
If it is difficult to use the car, there is a train called KTX. In addition, there is a airplane.
It take to 3 hours by train to go to the Busan.
And It take to 1 hours by airplane to go to the Busan.
There is a famous Beaches in Busan called Haeundae, like waikiki Beach!
강사 첨삭
Hello Angela,
Thank you for sahring this, it\'s very intersting to know different places in Korea and how convenient to travel there. By the way, I gave some correction to yor sentences and I hope it can help you do better expressions.
Good day!
Aki~
My parent\'s hometown is Busan Korea.
>>> CORRECT!
Busan is located at the end of Korea.
>>> Busan is located in the Southern part of South Korea.
So if I start at Seoul, It take to 6-7 hours by car to go to the Busan.
>>> So if I start in Seoul, It takes 6-7 hours by car to go to Busan.
Especially during the holidays it take to 10 hours by car.
>>> Especially during the holidays it takes up to 10 hours by car.
If it is difficult to use the car, there is a train called KTX.
>>> It is difficult to travel by car so there is also a train called KTX
In addition, there is a airplane.
>>> In addition, we can go there by an airplane.
It take to 3 hours by train to go to the Busan.
>>> It takes 3 hours by train to go to the Busan.
And It take to 1 hours by airplane to go to the Busan.
>>> But only 1 hour by airplane.
There is a famous Beaches in Busan called Haeundae, like waikiki Beach!
>>> There is a famous beach in Busan called Haeundae and it is like Waikiki Beach.
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