How good are you at interacting with people face to face?
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When I talk with someone who is tremendous beautiful, I can\'t make an eye contact with her. In addition to that, she has a blonde short hair, I wouldn\'t be good at interacting with her. And, I can\'t do with someone who wears thick glasses like the frog princess. It makes me dizzying. Without these cases, it\'s okay. Also, I prefer talking with someone face to face than texting messages. Most my classmates who drunk yesterday were absent in the today class. So, I talked a lot with the frog princess. She seemed it isn\'t as introvert as before. :)
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
When I talk with someone who is tremendous beautiful, I can\'t make an eye contact with her.
>> When I talk with someone who is tremendously beautiful, I can\'t make an eye contact with her.
In addition to that, she has a short blonde hair, I wouldn\'t be good at interacting with her.
>> CORRECT!And, I can\'t do with someone who wears thick glasses like the frog princess.
>> CORRECT!It makes me dizzying.
>> It makes me feel dizzy.
Without these cases, it\'s okay.
>> CORRECT!Also, I prefer talking with someone face to face than texting messages.
>> CORRECT!Most my classmates who drunk yesterday were absent in the today class.
>> Most of my classmates who got drunk yesterday were absent in today\'s class.
So, I talked a lot with the frog princess.
>> CORRECT!She seemed it isn\'t as introvert as before. :)
>> She seemed less introvert as before. :)
OR >> She isn\'t as introvert as before.
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